night slaughter of the whisperers
an
element of ritual initiation whispering
became
painfully obvious
to
the non-believers of sound
So
blue, so go-go crooked
Descending
into violence and threats
Honky-tonk
desires
they
make their way inside
An
empty gun
a
non-functioning piece for protection
prepare
the bastard to my right
Speed
Gang Diary written as the
Gang
Girls Talk of
girl-girl
blood
laughing
as they
swallow
fluids
She
adores one filming her
with
stretched out cunt
her
skirt riding up her back
the
shows play in a loop
inside
a building that once housed
a
museum of violence they look at the
mirrors
he and she see what had happened
trapped
faces sliced wide open
tongues
flapping branches hanging above them
mildew
and incense
snake
into their nostrils many
failed
attempts at orgasm
tableaus
short-circuited in a search for brief comfort
the
real thing is never as much fun
as
the pre-recorded data played over & over
inanity
drooling
a
grave in the future
a
deep touch
a
deep sound spoken gently
women
left to their own devices
lift
their skirts to take a photo while
clad
in moonlight
they’ll
take a photo of a victim
consumed
by lust and pain
Her
skirt was up
revealed
her huge smile
a
young man clad in a used motorcycle jacket
plays
acoustic guitar
sings
in echoes and
jumps
to the tracks
as
eyes upturned
bloodshot
whites
witness
the actions
the
swollen tongue of the sun licks
each
and every one of them
sick
with apologizing – they’re not sorry
slick
with want they claw and laugh
catch
a soul and kiss the switchblade
summer
is here
summer
is hers
an
erasure
naked
females lie spread-eagled in
the
fields as the grass turns brown –
they’re
giggling incessantly / teeth chattering
silent
milk droplets wash the sweat away
as
they beckon the moon to lick them warm
with
its throbbing tongue
praying
for the sun after its
image
has been tattooed
on
the soles of their feet
we’ll
start at point 1
with
the clinical hard push
of
a celebratory dinner of secrecy and deceit
until
the sounds that torture are erased
and
go to a vanishing point
pleasure
captives b/w creature features
Side A:
no
silence
no
sound
no
walls
room
empty
bare
floor
bare
light bulb
leave
time
recollected from
when
she was there.
shivering
fear going out into a world
they
chased her down.
collapsible
new faces grant
a
touch of the air,
a
time for the skin exclaiming for
the
mantra reclaimed -
the
thing that gave her purpose.
the
one that she lost
when
she took a spouse.
the
bodies are
buried
now.
the
fish scales covering her want
are
nursing the fear,
preventing
the coldburn,
a
burning with lead,
an
overcoat of obsession as she
breathes
and sinks.
Side B:
electrified
we walk out
into
glass shards electrified.
collapse
- she said so
she
said so
she
said so
she
liked the skin
as
it slid down, then off fully,
with
all the moisture
clinging
clinging
the
time is hollow.
touching
the sky
pierced by spikes from heaven
fingering the moon.
petrified
clouds hang in a heavy fashion.
she
touches them once -
a
collapsible fusion.
a laugh
then
a fall,
silently
embarrassed
by
what just occurred,
a new way of feeling -
it’s
a pleasure that she
doesn't
recognize.
last night she slept in a field that
projected green cooling skin sizzling,
as she negotiated for the arsenic dreams
that made her stronger.
toys
that were so accomplished
entertained
her for days
serpent handling: an additional killing
in the boudoir
1.
the
final test
her
love of screams
her
love of laughter.
at
the table:
a
nude female
diner
transfixed by transubstantiations
seen
in 3-D through the View-Master
reminisce
about a childhood toy.
a
miniaturized
woman
falls through the air
arms
rigid – movement voided
face
adorned by eyes frozen
mouth
decorated by saliva emanating
silver
tears mercurial in nature
a
touching,
a
caressing of skin.
her
nuclear shadow
(etched
into the molding
near
the termite holes) was
aggravated
by fast breathing,
now
a labored screaming function.
they
amused themselves with
a
giallo desire to be destroyed by knives
and
left in a clotting pool while the director wept
2.
her
mommy told of madness
and
tales of the snake-people,
cobra
dances and reptile prayers.
her
skin felt funny in the shower
water
didn’t feel good
(it’s
all fucked up).
the
preacher didn’t help.
no
help from a soul used up,
venom
makes its way through her blood vessels.
behind
the eyes vacant smiles
she
brought warning signs
to
others:
our
life-blackouts
your
infections
your
mood swings.
the
shower won’t cleanse
her
skin was raw.
she
turned on
she
turned over.
the
switch shorted out
a
case of ungrounded plugs.
she
counted two circular electrodes running scared
then
she was more comfortable with the situation.
contact
& control was a way of existence for her
the
charge slowly mattered to me
her
pussy lips pouting - so provocative.
“i
think she was a second timer to the receptacle
and
she’s
still there”
3.
they changed her face.
it
was inside then it was good.
years
of commercial use had forced a change.
she
went out leaving the room of odors and pain
clad
in black fishnet stockings –
to
do some posing on the
black
sand beach.
it’s
where the rattlers were handled with no thought for safety,
where
words were said with no redemption,
creatures
charmed by the rabid snake-charmers.
she
was deconstructed at 24 fps,
vibrating
water washes her ankles,
removes
sins.
afterwards
she sat down with a wet plop,
smiling
as bullets ricocheted.
this
was a done dream, dear, dear me.
by
the beach.
inside
the house,
the
maidens screamed for
pleasures
they had lost.
a
little game gone a little wrong
long
used to the shock level
she
measured out 1 shock duration and 1
automatic failure.
view
prey. pulse.
get
some sleep.
the
sun came
mimicking
a lifelike lust.
the
ruins disappear behind them
as
the extravagant electric vixens commit a crime
charmed
charming creatures
Night Slaughter of the Whisperers
ReplyDeleteThe reader (me) is immediately immersed in vivid imagery of a culture; underground, type of living, dark and illicit.
“Gang Girls Talk of
girl-girl blood
laughing as they
swallow fluids”….it’s a closed and close group – those that belong. I can imagine it from the older style porn sets…..(my take), a solidarity.
For me the truth is revealed in paragraph 6: the fun is in the end product, it’s meaninglessness more enjoyable in the observing rather than the “doing”.
Feels like there is an underlying play with the struggle of pleasure in the pain, the desire alongside apologies.
A dead end of heightened sexual pleasures and emotional conflicts here….this life. You express in this piece such a place where one is transported to the darkness and the human-ness is revealed.
Pleasure captives b/w creature features
This poem plays like the old 45’s for me….certainly set up by the A then B side, I fell into a rhythm as my mind took me that way… A side – the “hit” single…your voice is passive, watching. Not careful words, but a presence of a past covered….the past is whisperingly alluded to “the one that she lost when she took a spouse”….and the shiny protection of “fish scales covering her want…” A future (shown in present) where yearnings had gone subdued , but the smoke of desire still lingers. I like this one so very much. A truth I can feel…..the side B ~ the voice, that “we”. Here is a revisit (in my feeling) of the two sides of a person, the yin and yang….I LOVE : “a laugh
Then a fall,
silently embarrassed
by what just occurred,
a new way of feeling-
it’s a pleasure that she
doesn’t recognize”
A touch of modesty experienced and a heartfelt flush……YIN
Then follows, “the arsenic dreams…..toys that were so accomplished entertained her…” YANG - We all have our side A & B. I love this piece, the two sides as a whole.
Serpent handling: an additional killing in the boudoir
I hadn’t known what “giallo” was and now so informed it seems to have been a key for this poem – (theme for your first and last piece here falls into that film set and erotica). 1. Is the staging - your words create the stills of the moving picture. A crazy woman..
2. reality check – cleaning up…relapse….but there’s hope, that’s what I hear in the silence between the lines, the non-words.
The film metaphor … the thread, we have the leading lady in 3. I feel as though I am listening to a narrator while watching the inner life of this diva as she exposes her exterior created through that “deconstruction” of her life as a film star.
It’s beautifully written and the human being is so present. It feels genuine.
I may not interpret these works correctly but they reach me from my own life understanding. Film, being filmed, is a fantastic tool in writing to present many layers of experience(s) and a person. You’ve created 3 very intricate and independent pieces that are inherently connected…once again you’ve offered up brilliance.